Wednesday, June 28, 2017

Only A Fool Comments

Rating: 3.7

I'm the only one who sees you for what you are
Desperate, hopeless, lost
What ever happened to your heart?
Left to burn in the frost
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Ella Lazaare
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L C Knight 03 July 2017

Love the last stanza!

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Chinedu Dike 29 June 2017

Beautiful rendition of words embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. An insightful poem nicely brought forth with conviction. Thanks for sharing Ella.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 June 2017

Such an impressive poem you have written, Ella... Rated 10+++++ You may visit my HEARTACHES WILL NEVER LAST, BATHE YOUR HEART, and TAKE TIME TO THINK. Thanks.

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