Onion (Cinquain) Comments

this poem speaks the truth indeed.well done one Chandra

Onion, tears, friendship, many layers to this poem.

this is very simple wy of putting a heavy experience, i admire the mind that envisaged...!

Bingo! a short poem with a long message

Great metaphor - well done.

1,2,3,4 well known facts with the imagery verry good

very strong, very powerful piece! ! ! thanks for the explanatory notes too.