Friday, October 26, 2007

Oni (Devil) Comments

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You take away
I’ll be as fast as a bullet
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Lauren Degnan
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Risha : Ahmed 12 November 2007

That is a nice poem. You have a great vocabulary. And welcome to PH.

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Lee Degnan 27 October 2007

And that is what we call Oni (Devil) ... great write, my beautiful daughter, and welcome to Poemhunter! ! ! I love you. Ma

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