Oneness Comments

An inspired poem, which makes understand how duplicity is linked to unity, and may come from it. Oneness before division in two. And yet, the 'two' helps to understand the oneness. Like in an infinite circle in which all is one despite the many numerous dots needed to build it if one wants to understand it at our finite level.10

A beautiful prayer! May the good Lord touch our heart and soul, for a peaceful 2009! 10! -Raj Nandy

The Lord is beside you he is everywhere, an a oneness is felt from his love that we share.. Wonderful poem an sentiments Shiraz! *10*! Friend Thad

Great Persian! We must thanks God everyday for everything. Pleaswe comment Sailing in this love.

nicely penned anjali

nice sentiment gratitude to our Creator..10 Ency Bearis

from dvaita to advaita... the ultimate of life...

what a beautiful poem i loved it 10!

I agree with Reihaneh...I have no clue what Oneness means but I love this peom.....My favorite of yours by far. Very Beautiful Thanks for sharing -Brie

though i didn't get what you mean by 'oneness', but your poem was cool. thanks

Well organised thoughts and well composed poem. Loved it. CP

Tie the oneness cord.. .................................. ..Have well told Amir, it is magnificent thought..10.... Tsira

P ondering thoughts e nriched prayer r eckon the blessings s owed in mankind i n the hope a t the end n one is left unloved!

Wow nice flow to this poem.. Great job! ! ! Krista

Enjoyed this poem :)