! ! Oneness Comments

A truly beautiful poem and you took me on a journey of your discovery that unfolded nature and the oneness of of life on this planet. We are all part of a whole, part of each other, and nature. Yet some humans treat nature with cruelty and they are defying the reason for their existence, to be at one and love each other, and do unto others as we would do unto ourselves. I felt the magic in the air and heard the songs in your poem, which is such a spiritually uplifting piece of work. 10 love Karin

We amble, moving slowly, searching, looking, so we can discover hidden places, spaces, answers, solutions, to the worlds of mystery in our minds. Rachel Ann Butler

The last stanza gives a marvellous conclusion to this poem! 10+ Today I was hearing about -'The String Theory', - a 10 mins video clip, which uphold this 'Oneness'! It says the entire cosmic fabric is the result of vibration of nano strings, which create and re-creates all things! And God is the master conductor controlling this cosmic orchestra! I will be writing on this, one of these days! Your 'Oneness' is a cosmic reality, - Brian Green says! ! ! ! -Raj Nandy

ONENESS spills out unknown joy of the heart, which merges with the spirit of nature, in quiet transedence, in the midst of everything.really enjoyed reading this lovely work.thanks for sharing!

I am gifted to read the oneness........ the poem touches more horizons and towards enlightment...... the writing shows the fond of write with nature........great write........

This is a wonderful theme on oneness Its such an intangible The feel, covers the self as a whole Nothing much to speak or show. Its said to be - An open feeling, a sense of freedom A sense of contentment in knowing That you are one with the nature. Great write. Enjoyed the inner feel. Thank you.

The universe is logically or aesthetically consistent and holding together as a harmonious or credible whole but still is a single entity. Seeing the oneness of life, and experiencing this with no Self in the way to distort it, is so very different to how the mind tries to project it. The mind literally has no idea how it truly is from an experiential perspective. It is always so much more simple and down-to-earth than the mind could ever imagine or comprehend.The center of the universe dwells a great spirit, and this center lies within each of us i.e., the oneness of oneself....I add this poem to my favourite poems list.....10/10

It is an extra-ordinary poem with true message. We are truly one! 10+++

yeah this whole universe is one................the one without second............as it is written in the scriptures in beginning there was word.........and word was made flesh................so there is onesss......good write..........

This is a wonderfyll piece, i loved it! ! Well done BoB :)

Striking imagery, Bob.

I have often felt this oneness with every living thing. A beautiful tribute to the dawn. You are a wonderful word painter. Always your friend, Sandra

A wonderful imagery of the world through the eyes of a poet. I love the way you describe the beauty of the world with such imaginative words! Very nice. I hope it will get to the Top 500 Poems!

what an outstanding display of color! Excellent discriptions!

Profound in thought, rich in imagery attaining poetic heights in its rhytm and flow. Perhaps, the mind, with the rising sun, affront with the diversity starts its game of combination and permutation and tired of it, with the setting sun gets rid of illusion, finds relief in its oneness for rest and peace. CP

I love the flow to this poem. The word usage, format and more was / is EXCELLENT! Great Job! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Bob - a lovely poem that captures many 'radiant' moments; your lines invite the reader to walk with one another in this silence....Very peaceful.

the journey, the quest and finally the realisation -oneness with the universe- lovely Bob, very beaitiful images of morning coming alive with Sun. there is a serenity about the way you have expressed your feelings.10 Mamta

Hi Bob - You have some wonderful imagery, wrapping within its folds, profound truth. If we are sensitive enough to life's gentle beckoning, we shall realise - at some point - that everything is within. The last stanza brings this out beautifully. All the best... Leonard

Flows effortlessly and effectively guides us to the transcendental message of the last stanza. Emersonian in its conviction of the oneness, or 'oversoul' of things. If only we humans could see how much we are a part of all humanity and all nature, we just might get our act together. Excellent poem.