Saturday, September 22, 2012

One Year A Tree Day Comments

Rating: 4.7

Oh gently giants
How are you so old?
Calendar after calendar
Shaped from your sacrifice
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Stevie Taite
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Ruby Honeytip 25 November 2012

Making most of your day, you silently forge another ring  Man oh man you are good! If you read this in someone elses poem you would freak out at how good it is. Start freaking out about how good you are. Sooooooooo good! x

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Kelvin Owusu 24 September 2012

this is a lovely poem, the last few lines really got me, well done this is excellently written

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Pranab K Chakraborty 24 September 2012

Nice tribute to the gently giants.....Bare, bud, green, gold / This is how you are so old! ....Beautiful.

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Asif Andalib 24 September 2012

Trees remind us of the seasons change. Beautiful write

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Kelly Seale 23 September 2012

...And in your night, naked and fasting, sipping your mineral (homemade) tipple and contemplating your next great day...... My favorite line! ; -) I LOve it! ! ! Another Great Write Stevie! ; -) -Kelly.

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Valerie Dohren 23 September 2012

Beautiful Stevie, a lot of imagination in here, a very enjoyable read. Well done.

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Stevie Taite

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