Oh gently giants
How are you so old?
Calendar after calendar
Shaped from your sacrifice
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this is a lovely poem, the last few lines really got me, well done this is excellently written
Nice tribute to the gently giants.....Bare, bud, green, gold / This is how you are so old! ....Beautiful.
...And in your night, naked and fasting, sipping your mineral (homemade) tipple and contemplating your next great day...... My favorite line! ; -) I LOve it! ! ! Another Great Write Stevie! ; -) -Kelly.
Beautiful Stevie, a lot of imagination in here, a very enjoyable read. Well done.
Making most of your day, you silently forge another ring Man oh man you are good! If you read this in someone elses poem you would freak out at how good it is. Start freaking out about how good you are. Sooooooooo good! x