Monday, September 16, 2013

One World With One Race Comments

Rating: 4.9

No matter which country, which religion
And what color you belong.
It matters me, whether you're with humanity,
Where I try to belong.
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Amitava Sur
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Hans Vr 05 October 2014

Excellent, a world full of peace, one race named humans, so good. I love it.

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Savita Tyagi 30 June 2014

Beautiful poem with great message of love and unity. If more would follow the world would've a better place. Rhythm and flow is superb.

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Roseann Shawiak 16 May 2014

One world united in peace like the flowers in a gigantic garden, bringing joy and beauty to all the world. Touched my mind and heart, with hope that someday our earth will be that ideal you have portrayed in this poem. Great one, most artistic poet, Amitava! RoseAnn

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Erika Wingo 27 February 2014

A wonderfully stunning write. I hope your words touch and inspire many others to open their hearts and minds in this way. You have certainly done so for me!

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Lyn Paul 08 February 2014

Great title, Wonderful words... let us prayer that this one race is in this lifetime

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Gajanan Mishra 11 January 2014

mankind with full grace, very fine, thanks.

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Hazel Durham 01 January 2014

Beautiful with great wisdom and humanity, to love is the most powerful emotion of all it brings joy, peace and hope to our world! I love this inspired write!

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Valsa George 02 October 2013

Love is the binding force and all differences of class, caste and colour disintegrate when human hearts are filled with the magic potion of divine love. Unfortunately each one builds a citadel around him and within these walls of segregation, he confines himself! A beautiful poem with a lofty message!

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Patricia Grantham 22 September 2013

A wonderful poem my friend. Nicely worded and well penned. One world: race, creed, color. No more separation. A flower with many colors and still beautiful. Will bear fruit one day. Hope for the best. Very inspiring

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Hazel Durham 20 September 2013

Beautiful poem full of hope for the future where love will rule supreme!

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