Tuesday, September 6, 2016

One Word Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pages flutter in the halls of Alexandria
Lost visions, ancient longing
Row upon row as deep as the dunes
Sculpted roof in midnight's embrace
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Edmund Strolis
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Madathil Rajendran Nair 12 September 2016

This is a very beautiful write as I read it at least ten times. Yet, I don't think I understood it fully. I wish you had given us readers a small note of explanation. The concluding lines have a mysterious beauty about them. Filled with great images. (10)

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Anne Yun 06 September 2016

'Shimmering with stellar delight Waves kiss your shore once more Mediterranean wonder' One word, one word would be enough to bring you to this wonderfully poetic wonder! ! Enjoyed it, thanks for sharing

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 September 2016

Shimmering with stellar delight Waves kiss your shore once more....Reaching heights with amazing expression of poem is interesting here. Nicely penned! ..10

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