One Word Comments

This does work! Sitting there on the edges of our senses. A great translucent poem. Adeline

The repetition of the 'one word' is haunting here Jim - and we are carried into the realm of realisation, with you, of caring lots more than we thought - - through the 'one word'. Strongly put together in short lines but with punch in each one.

Another deep meaningful poem Sir James Timothy Jarrett. Happy Sweetest Day! Linda