James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
Sunday, June 7, 2009

One Womans Find Comments

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Again it is existentially diminished it's trail
being as Ursala, phenomenally unbalanced to find
a way, without pheromones tail of spears.
These hers, it's trail mixed with other crumbs, one
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Hannah Benson 13 June 2009

ive been reading your poems i like them i just havent been on in a while i really like this you should keep on writing mabey it will inspire me more than you already have

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Michael Pruchnicki 10 June 2009

Sometimes I think I know what you're trying to say, but then I realize I don't have a clue! A word of caution, whoever you are in the Bowery Poets Club, learn some basic skills in poetry! No matter what some of these schmucks on this site say, you gotta have a good grasp of the language and some kowledge of basic poetic techniques to write a half-way decent poem! Good fortune, sirrah!

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Linda Winchell 07 June 2009

Very busy and hungry little ants I think. Great mind bending poem here. God Bless, Linda

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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