One With The Night (A Park Scene) Comments

lovely poem, i liked it

well narrated......touching with the salt of pain and tears......................but all is not lost as u could put it in a beautiful poem............ :)

Powerful! A very well penned and poignant write! Sad but yet heart touching since we all go through this stage one time or another but it is part of our growing up! You are young, strong and talented to find the ways to move on and temporarily perhaps, vanishing into the fog but soon you will rise like a Leon and climb the higher mountain of the Poetry World and find a new Love that will wholeheartedly appreciate your true love! 10+++ Keep it up! Tiger! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from Bronx, NY...

simple and beautiful.the ending is nice.loved it.

Wonderful composition of rhyme and simple yet intelligent words. Nice poem! ! Please keep sharing...

get up, plunge my hands into my leather jacket, and vanish into the fog, becoming one with the night… liked these lines... all in vain or a sweet dream!