One Wish - Together Forever Comments

Lovely lines loaded with love. Well done my friend!

Amazing..i wish i could write like this..may be one day!

Very subtly laid out in fine manners. Full of emotions and straight from the heart! thanks for sharing

aww! thats amazing! i like it soo much! keep it up, , thanks for charing

A one single thought to have you by my side Prayers to the almighty, so that we are never apart! ! ! nice desire to be fulfilled with HHis blessings... nice poem....10

Holy wishes of any loving heart u`ve amazingly penned above! Happy r those women who r being dedicated such lines and blessed r those who can truly appreciate this

this is an awesome poem. i like it. keep writing the ones lke this

So passionate, nicely expressed. Both poet & poet's beloved are lucky, , , , , , one is being loved in such way and another belonging such beloved who can charge to love in this way.

I wish, you don't forget your wishes as days progress. Keep reading this particular poem often and remember to execute. Life will be definitely wonderful.

Wish to rise each day with, feel of your lips on my cheek Whispers of your breath in my ears, touch of your fingers on my skin You hugging me in your arms, your heartbeats close to mine Warmth of emotions in your eyes, feelings of love deep within..... you express very well in a p ictureque way your wishes and feelings. very nice work. thank you for sharing.

A beautiful work of art glorifying love. The emotion flows straight from the heart and you have captured it in words very well.

Yes, it is a wonderful lyric poem, the feelings are so deep and so poetical expressed...thank you for sharing your wonderful poem....10/10/10 Mari

An intense poem. Full of emotion, , weaved by the power of love. Wonderful write! ; D

wow... so inspiring.. the one you love must be so blessed because god gives you to her... being loved by some one like you makes a life so fulfilling.. great job...

Hey dear its really really soooooo beautiful & sooo lovable............. Each & every word is discribed so wonderflly....... Keep it up. God bless

A marvelous poem, an oasis of intense feelings of love- what a joy! What if some of these feelings we really turned into action-I think that will be ecstasy-what do you think? EXCELLENT and give you 10++++. Thanks for sharing...