One Winter Morning At The Village Road Comments

A very realistic portrayal of a pastoral life during winter mornings. Nicely crafted poem. Thanks, Akham ji.

Really good poem, Village life can seem like a rural idyll to outsiders but most villages have a high level of poverty and poor public services.

Thanks for sharing the poem Sir. Good one :)

Yet the time was late. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

The poem is too good about the nature in poverty.

Akham, Very nostalgic poem- about village and about winter. Yes, in winter, however you hurry, Yet the time was late. Nice poem. Exquisitely phrased to bring out the right mood of nostalgia. Thank you for sharing. A perfect 10 for you. I have posted a poem A Winter in Delhi. can you read and offer comments? Thank you.

The memory of a village incident beautifully made into the poem