Wednesday, September 30, 2009

One Winged Butterfly Comments

Rating: 5.0

Like a one winged
butterfly
I turn circles in the sky
Lost and spiraling down
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Bryan Alexander
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Janell Cressman 03 October 2009

a poem full of strong emostions, that is what I think pulls me in, it's all the deep emstions that fill your poems and make them your own,

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Joseph Poewhit 30 September 2009

Nice a reverse transformation of love

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Srishti ds 30 September 2009

once a butterfly now a caterpillar again When I had you I could fly now I'm ordinary again i loved the above lines..beautiful poem..10++

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Bryan Alexander

Wickliffe, Ohio
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