Wednesday, December 2, 2015

One Windy Day Comments

Rating: 4.7

When wind blows I pretend to swim
Through fluffy waves of air
That wash over my blushing cheeks
And toss my tangled hair
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April Lane
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Howard Savage 03 January 2016

Great poem, reminds me of being at sea on a windy day.

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Kim Barney 07 December 2015

What an imagination you have! I especially like the line: I fear my thoughts will drown This poem is very well done. Congratulations.

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Sharika Hafeez 02 December 2015

Wow, its simply amazing! So flowy!

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Rahman Henry 02 December 2015

My hands reach out to catch a rail Lest I be swept away A victim of the viewless tide That struck one windy day Excellently illustrated and thought provoking poem....10.....

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