Saturday, September 14, 2019

One Who Has Gone Comments

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One remained with me in the sunlight,
One remained with me in the moonlight,
One combed my hairs with one's fingers,
One calmed down during my roaring angers,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 September 2019

A fascinating poem. Youth offers varied and wonderful feelings. But as one grows older, he gains wisdom. And can write many poems, varied and insightful for the Youth 's perusal. A well crafted and unique write. Liked the lovely and colorful picture.

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Rajnish Manga 14 September 2019

Nicely articulated poem about youth and what it feels like when it is gone. Thanks.

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