Friday, April 18, 2008

One Way Out... Comments

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I understand the fight in her eyes
tension thick as a dagger's blow
piercing even the most deadly of foes
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Thomas Spencer
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Kimberley Logan 20 April 2008

awsome another great endin line; nice work

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Lovemo Queen 18 April 2008

This takes my breath away... Its a great read and keeps you wanting more You got it to flow perfectly and the topic is just so...perfect lol i really LOVED this poem

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