Wednesday, September 19, 2018

One Way Nirvana Comments

Rating: 4.5

Where is the need to pray
in nude
lying on the sand
then endeavour to cover
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Anil Kumar Panda 20 September 2018

'there is no need to show artificiality all are of same kind of human beings as you just pray let all come and bow.'..is very nice. I agree with you. Thanks for sharing. I like such type of poem.10+++

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 20 September 2018

so kind of you AKP Your words are like a candle light we all must light thanx

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Ashika Murali Acharya 19 September 2018

I particularly liked the quest in the first two stanza.... Nicely weaved out creation.

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Ifediirichukwu Victor 19 September 2018

nice poem you've got congratulations

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 19 September 2018

thanks a lot may read two best ones on moms

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