Friday, October 7, 2005

One Way Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

I saw him and I sighed with love,
He was tall, dark and divine,
His clothes, they fitted, like a glove,
I felt that he was mine.
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Ernestine Northover
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David Threadgold 09 October 2008

Hi Ernestine. whilst reading this I was thinking how romantic, but the ending was a real suprise. what a laugh. good one Regards Dave T..10..

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Brian Dorn 21 August 2006

The perfect ending, Ernestine! ! Good looks but no brain, you've probably met enough 'real' guys like that. Funny stuff! Brian

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Duncan Wyllie 09 May 2006

Brilliant twist to this, and so well done, Love duncan

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Ghada Shahbender 08 October 2005

I'm laughing out loud (haven't done that in ages) . Thank you Ernestine. You have an amazing talent for building up expectation and delivering a humorous finale.

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Herbert Nehrlich1 08 October 2005

Had he been alive he would have loved your sense of humour! Good writing. H

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Peter A. Crowther 07 October 2005

Very amusing. A good one!

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