One Way A Child Learns Comments

Excellent, from the first word to the last; that ending says it all. A definite 10! Cheers, Lori

Very powerful, my friend. The up-front image is great. I really wish I owned it, and the conclusion is on the money. Fine poem. Take care, John

When a child empathize in the history (as you say the past being the pull of old ones) and this cursed world, sometimes this tiny brain may regret for coming to this unbalanced rotating endanger world? Learned a lot.Thank you Max!