One-Vowel Haiku (A) Comments

Let us try an i. i wrote this a few days ago: (i already had been inspired by this poem from brian mayo) - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - It Is Night I sit. I'm still. It is night. [ok, did i cheat by substituting an apostrophe for an a? ? ? ] It is night; I still sit tight. Night instills in Bri its fright. His night-fright still is, till it is light. thanks, Brian bri ;)

been here even better

Creativity and original it is rare to come and you did a justice Brian.10+++++

yeah, no original ideas! hmmmm? bathing in molten lava? DONE, but not on purpose. a warm thanks at ya! WHAT is Pamela Sinicrope talking about? ? ? ! and this computer underlines her last name in RED, so she must be fictitious. to MyPoemList this goes! bri :)

here's one with every a sounding the same: At Phat Rat, rat-at- tat-at-tat-at-tat shat that bad, fat, black-backed cat.

How about the person who uses THE Hlhighes proportion of a single vowel relative to the overall number of letters... Has that been done? ;) . Well done, Brian!

I think this addition enhances the affect of minimalism that is inherent to the Haiku form. Nicely done.

Very amazing haiku shared definitely. This expresses wise skill around....10

Fantastic imagery, I like this Haiku very much...10

You can go into production, this prototype is good. Thanks

I like to experiment too, Brian. Nicely done