Thursday, October 22, 2009

One Two Three Comments

Rating: 4.2

One two three
Never jump from tree.
Four five six
With strangers never mix
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Hilton Ball 08 July 2011

i like it its nice to have a mom to help teach you multiple things at one time wish i had that chance but keep writing it will help

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Jovahna Davis 21 March 2011

WOW nice poem im luvin it :) keep goin! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Robin Serdynski 23 July 2010

kool it is good but kind of long 2 but keep goin

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Dwi Utami 22 July 2010

hmmm i'dont have a coment but only say great of you: +: 10

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Elena Sandu 05 April 2010

I think you have fun writing! ! Dont ever stop, we have fun reading you! ! you got a special funny tongue, go on!

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Emma Adamyan 29 March 2010

u c how counting to 100 u could open the World! never ever read sth as unusual and fine as this one. a special poem for sure.10++++++++++++

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Anusha Subramanian 15 March 2010

Woah! Its wonderful! Love - (As advised by mom) .. Nice one.. Keep it going.. WOW! ! ! ! ! !

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Iron Panda 23™ 04 March 2010

lol i friffin LOVED it! ! it was AWESOME! ! 23000000++++ i'll drink the tea but not the lemons xP yuupsss...those seemed like words of wisdom from my conscience *nods*

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Monica Sevilla 16 February 2010

ahahaha nice one! ! ! it brings back the childhood memories of mine! !

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giggling wonder 14 December 2009

wow that was really playfulll maybe i'll do somthing like that

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 12 December 2009

Indeed fun to read and have shown your wit poetically… Ms. Nivedita UK

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Dr.subhendu Kar 30 November 2009

oh really conscience keeper, i would give u certainly 10/10...

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wow u musta bin real bored wen u rote dis lol too hav ritten up to a hundred but nice fun to read n catchy good job

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Shekhar Joshi 04 November 2009

Nice one.....fun to read...........keep going....... ;)

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Elsee Daniel 03 November 2009

beautifully penned....i really loved it 10000000000000000000000000000000000000+ wish u all the best to read more poems: o)

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Quin Faas 01 November 2009

i especially enjoyed (as advised by my Mom)

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Prakash Mehra 01 November 2009

Written cleverly. I enjoyed it.

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rago rago 30 October 2009

very nice..............and written well ................

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Anjali Sinha 29 October 2009

hey little one, whoever you are welcome to poemhunter and yes ofcourse you have my ten points a good write indeed love anjali

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 October 2009

One two three Never jump from tree. Four five six With strangers never mix Seven eight nine...vry good and intellegent way of putting the views... it is perfect..keep writing....10 read mine kids...no teacher please... hen laid aneggs...school

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