One-Twenty Comments

Illuminating, and methodically masterful, Kelly. Really, this is brilliantly ascribed like some arty sunset; awe-inspiring…

In words, you have beautifully painted a picture... most wonderful

This was quite enjoyable, Kelly...From the intrepid elocution to the crisp, dove-tail structure via well employed, short-cropt versing...Job well done, Sir! FJR

Perfect, I like this very much. Exceptional poem. All the best, Diane

A lovely description of changing perceptions and values. Perfectly paced.

Excellent poem with a unique structure. I liked it very much

Beautiful game of rhythm and rhymes, I like it very much: -) Take care, Martine

Very nice, Kelly, I have read poems in the top 500 that are not this good, excellent work.10 easly