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you're not safe anywhere, but you got this far, so it can't be all that bad.

Very interesting poem. Contains some very wise words.

This is interesting to say the least- I just wonder if it would have had more power if it had less targets.

Sort of like playing chess. When you think you have found the best move, look again and try to find a better one. Although it's a little bit too long for me, it still has some good advice.

This is my favorite poem ever. My wife, who doesn't even care very much for poetry loves it as well. Thanks K K I know this was a labor of love.