Monday, May 1, 2006

One Tiny Voice Comments

Rating: 5.0

All it takes it one tiny voice
To tell you that somethings not right
Why won't you listen to it
I know your very scared
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chelsi Ruffing
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Vanessa Deroma 01 May 2006

wow! i hardly listen to my tiny voice.....and when i dont, i get hurt....nice to see it from another perspective! good good good vanessa d.

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Mary-Elizabeth Conn 01 May 2006

I really enjoyed this poem. It's funny that nobody pays attention to the tiny voice; I suppose it's just because there's a louder one saying the wrong thing over it. Keep up the good work :)

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