One That Got Away Comments

I know, and recognize the pain you have scripted here, so well. I again, invite you in, to read one of my poems, Once Tossed, The Ripple Caused, that perhaps, bleeds from the same vein..I will venture further into your catalogue....anticipating fine works. PEACE

This really touched my heart. I can feel the mellow tone of your voice in this poem, and I think that's what I love most about it. I was questioning it in the beginning, but as soon as I read I look back to before the end / to the tantalizing past / memories fade so fast / and nothing good ever really lasts, you had me. This stanza contains so much emotion... it's incredible. That's what I look for when I read poems. Fantastic job! Keep it up.