Saturday, August 24, 2019

One That Cupid Forgot Comments

Rating: 4.8

She was pretty, vivacious, and full of life
And dreamed of becoming someone's wife
How is it that life did pass her by
And bring disappointment which made her cry?
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Aqua Flower 25 August 2019

What an adorable poem. I hear ya! We often wonder when will cupids bow stike us and give us true love! I guess the bow has to strike both! Enjoyed this immensely! :)

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Practicing Poetess 26 August 2019

Thank ya, Aqua! Always great hearing from you! And, you got it right- - Cupid's bow apparently doesn't work unless it hits BOTH hearts! :)

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Louis Rams 24 August 2019

the cupid did not forget her, it just passed her by waiting for that special moment to give true love a try

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Practicing Poetess 24 August 2019

Awww, Louis- - That's so sweet! I sure do hope you are right about that one, for the sake of that poor longsuffering girl :)

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Mahtab Bangalee 24 August 2019

Love Appears to be the luck - it's Cupid's law! /// wonderful poem penned, I enjoyed

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Practicing Poetess 24 August 2019

Many thanks, Mahtab. Cupid doesn't always play fair.

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 August 2019

Time and again! ! ! ! Muse of love and life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Practicing Poetess 24 August 2019

Thanks for reading and commenting, Edward Kofi. :)

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