Friday, September 4, 2020

One Summer Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was rehearsing for an upcoming play, but it wasn't going well,
For I somehow lacked inspiration, and my delivery did not excel.

If only I could read more feelingly, I uttered with a sad sigh,
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
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Rajnish Manga 04 September 2020

(2) Each couplet of the poem is a precious gem which turns out to be a revelation when it comes to our disappointments in life and how to change it to our advantage. The imagined scene where Shakespeare himself is there on the front seat watching your fine performance is just awesome. Thanks a lot my friend.

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Rajnish Manga 04 September 2020

As I stood at my bedroom window, looking up at the pale stars, One glinted off of my teardrop, as I gazed at the heavens afar. For there is more magic in the world, than what we think we see It's a sheer joy to read this poem radiating positivity all the way. This goes into MyPoemList.

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Varsha M 04 September 2020

A beautiful poetic expression of a journey I found so real as if the scene rolling right in front of my eyes not even for a moment I failed to catch up the indwelling experience the bard was conveying. Indeed journey is memorable teaching the lesson to be part of the art will you are creating. Nothing is as valuing as you yourself admiring your masterpiece. Refreshing poetry. Thank-you so much.

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