Wednesday, November 22, 2017

One Sultry Summer Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

To beat sultry summer day and seek the seclusion of another world
We friends once went after wood
Deliberating beforehand to stay a day or two with things wild
To explore the wood far and wide
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Valsa George 09 April 2018

I made an exciting journey along with you and your team mates into the heart of the woods! What beauty you have unraveled here! Nature with its flora and fauna has come alive before my eyes! Happy to see you Deepak after such a long spell of time! Thanks for this wonderful journey you have allowed!

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Susan Williams 31 December 2017

Line after line of images that speak so luringly to the readers- especially those snowbound in their homes in the American winter. I warm my toes at these gorgeous summer sights and sounds and thank you and my goodness what an image here- -] When seeing his flame the moth from nowhere brightened And fluttered over into it and died

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Many many thanks.........Susan...........I am humbled

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Rajnish Manga 24 November 2017

Exquisitely crafted poem which fascinates by its portrayal of nature, flora and fauna. But the poem is unique in its interpretation of all factors when it comes to human life Thanks a lot. That deer and elephants and others Were victims of all five senses essential? Like sound, touch, form, taste and smell

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 25 November 2017

Many many thanks....Rajnishji.........I am humbled

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Bernard F. Asuncion 22 November 2017

Such a well-written heartwarming poem, Deepak... a huge 10++++

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 23 November 2017

Many many thanks......Bernard........I am humbled

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