Friday, October 23, 2015

One Spice Comments

Rating: 5.0

Better to taste one only spice
That you used to in early time
Stay addicted to with your rice
You'd be eager in every clime
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Kassem Oude
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Lorraine Colon 25 October 2015

Yes, moderation is the key. Go slowly and carefully when trying new things. Haste does make waste, and overindulgence can make us sick. Sound advice in this well written poem.

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 October 2015

Very nice. Loved all the stanzas.

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