Sunday, June 6, 2010

One Smile Of Yours Comments

Rating: 4.7

One Smile of Yours
Is worth LIVING my life for...
It makes me forget all day's pain
Refreshing; like a dance in rain....
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Rohit Sharma
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Gan Chennai 26 June 2010

Can try 'Close up Tooth Paste' Ad. Just for Joke. For a change. Lovely poem.

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Gita Ashok 11 June 2010

So much for one smile! Hope that smile remains with you forever! Beautifully written. The lines I like most: Life's tough, brings all the troubles Your Smile makes them go like bubbles It gives me strength to face them all Tells; you're with me till my last call.... Thanks for sharing and keep writing and sharing.

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Amrit Rathi 09 June 2010

With smile the world looks different. And with the smile of the beloved, it looks different beyond imagination, the heart jumping and frisking! You have written it very well packing it up with great feelings which the smile invokes.Vote 8/10

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Joseph Poewhit 06 June 2010

AND, a smile costs nothing

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Anita Trivedi 06 June 2010

'One Smile of yours Is Worth Giving my life for... its great to read......! ! ! ! ! !

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