Friday, September 4, 2009

One Smile Comments

Rating: 4.5

Why do people hate me?
most people say...
Why am I so lonely
with nobody here to stay?
...
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Madelene Calalo
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Jemima Cabanlong 15 September 2009

excellent.. one smile shatters a whole life's pain.. keep smiling and writing.. :)

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Lorena Cruz 12 September 2009

very well written.. keep on rocking

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Nashy Lamen 07 September 2009

hmm.. inspired..... nicely written.. Good job! ... keep writing such lovely poems my friend...

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Danzen D. 05 September 2009

Hehe, I agree with Shiny Big Thigh. Keep writing!

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Shingih Big-thigh 04 September 2009

this poem is just excellent

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