Friday, March 9, 2012

One Single Night Comments

Rating: 4.0

Being all lonely at the night
You think what's wrong and what is right
Nothing comes to your mind as such
But you don't even feel sleepy so much
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Aishwarya Misra
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Zubayer Zakir Khan 08 April 2012

hmmm...lots of creepy thoughts crawl into your head, hope they never turn into bugs that haunt the bed: p...well actually I like the flow of this poem...it is sweet yet it expresses little confusions that get the better of us at times...keep on writing I'm sure you can do much better. Cheers =)

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