Saturday, April 12, 2014

One Single Black Grain Comments

Rating: 5.0

On a wave washed crystal white beach
Uncountable billions of grains of sand
Perfect beauty from the sun's own bleach
Shimmers of purity stretch across the land
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Noah Body
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Lorraine Colon 14 April 2014

Perfectly describes something that disrupts the natural beauty or flow of things....something that just doesn't belong and is totally out of place. This could refer to any number of things - we'll just let our imaginations run wild. Excellent poem.

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