Sunday, January 22, 2006

One Simple Wish Comments

Rating: 4.3

promise me
that when all is said and done
there will not have been
precious moments wasted
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Lori Boulard
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Esther Leclerc 07 June 2006

Mmm, I hear you so well in this... Love needs TLC just like anything worth having. Life is short enough as it is, so... Thanks for this.

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John Kay 27 January 2006

Now this in its own way is a very nicely controlled, well paced poem. Koozer would like this one.

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Uriah Hamilton 22 January 2006

Lori. I hope he keeps up his end, he is a fool otherwise! ! !

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Lea Simpson 22 January 2006

A simple yet bountiful wish. May it come true for more of us.

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Lucy Burrow 22 January 2006

A wonderful sentiment so sweetly put. I am glad I dropped in and read it. Regards, Lucy

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Mary Nagy 22 January 2006

This is great Lori. I fear this same thing with life being so hectic it's easy to lose sight of what's really important. Lovely poem. Sincerely, Mary

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