promise me
that when all is said and done
there will not have been
precious moments wasted
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Now this in its own way is a very nicely controlled, well paced poem. Koozer would like this one.
Lori. I hope he keeps up his end, he is a fool otherwise! ! !
A wonderful sentiment so sweetly put. I am glad I dropped in and read it. Regards, Lucy
This is great Lori. I fear this same thing with life being so hectic it's easy to lose sight of what's really important. Lovely poem. Sincerely, Mary
Mmm, I hear you so well in this... Love needs TLC just like anything worth having. Life is short enough as it is, so... Thanks for this.