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.....''In the ocean of love, I would forever stray His eyes acknowledged my existence But his silence was loud like crashing waves All men are scared of women till she looks directly into his eyes and smiles Lady IRFAN your name is well known Kindly evaluate my poem MOMS SMILES Thanks

In the ocean of love, I would forever stray His eyes acknowledged my existence But his silence was loud like crashing waves

It happens, Almighty has blessed everyone with some or the other qualities and they carry an aura around, the life of this crush is similar to that of bubbles. A fantastic poem.

Well written poem! Really well written

A fabulous poem....wonderful imagination! I just delve into the depth of your expression....'his silence was loud like crashing waves' Just brilliant.......10