Monday, October 28, 2013

One-Sided Love Comments

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Yet I have not become, your center of attraction;
Though you've got the place of my all affection.
How hard I've tried, but you do not recognize;
My destiny maybe hopelessness, now I realize.
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Majid Zubedi
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Roseann Shawiak 10 January 2016

Love can be a very painful experience when a woman cares more for money and fame than for the genuine love of a man. Can feel the saddened heartbreak of hopelessness within your words. Great poem! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Chinedu Dike 26 September 2014

This is a case of stress in the bliss of love. A nice poem well penned. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Ahatisham Alam 11 November 2013

really you have much pain in your life...

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