Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Wednesday, November 14, 2012

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Why some one should feel unequal
When god has sent us on earth as equal
We might have been born to rich
But is that curse or beyond reach?
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 November 2012

Ahmad SorgenFrei interesting face- Chinese african, maybe survivor of Atlantis? 10 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 November 2012

Sabeen Rashid, Farouk Umar and 2 others like this. Sabeen Rashid Okay, now that got me too... it was a beautiful emotional experience going through this poem... Every right word that I could feel and connect with...cliched though, but holds true any day....God couldn't be present everywhere, so He created MOMMIES! ! Loved this poem! 37 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 November 2012

Seen by 9 Kabeer Katariya likes this. Kabeer Katariya written with an unique purity! 11 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 November 2012

Laura Grillo Laveglia I so agree with you that we should all treat each other equal! ! ! 11 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 November 2012

Muazzama Ali Shah Nice suggestions presented in your poem. I agree with you. In the last line of the poem, advise should be advicebecause you've used it as noun, rest everything is okay. 8 hours ago via mobile · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 November 2012

Why some one should feel unequal When god has sent us on earth as equal We might have been born to rich But is that curse or beyond reach?

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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