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You asked me about the flip side of this poem, but I am also looking at the rest. For this poem and the others, what if your ending was more positive...working BACKWARD from that idea, how would you write the poem differently. Try it. Val

My dear, don't tell us. Show us in your poem. You have that talent already. But I would urge you to write the flip side of this poem. Email me when you have it. I would like to compare the two. Val