Monday, December 8, 2008

One's Thoughts Comments

Rating: 5.0

My mind is blank as if it were an empty room without light.
My soul is cold as if it were filled with ice from winters night.
My heart is hurt as if it were a bird with broken wings.
My body is tired as if it were suffering from all these things.
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Rebekah Arwood 09 December 2008

'One's Thoughts'...an apt title to a skillfully written poem. Well done.

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L0$t 0n3 08 December 2008

i really like this...

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