Saturday, September 19, 2020

One's Past Is Always There Comments

Rating: 4.0

Standing in the shower
As the water sprays my face
I somehow wish right now
I could be in a better place
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Ray Hansell
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Anil Kumar Panda 19 September 2020

A very emotional poem. There is sadness in the last stanza. Beautifully crafted. Thanks for sharing. Keep dropping such nice poem.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 19 September 2020

Give it a try. You got nothing to lose. Give that apology. You might be surprised. Good poem. If it works we want a poem. If it doesnt work we want a poem

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