Thursday, February 18, 2016

One Poem Is Too Short Comments

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You come to meet me once a year, yourself
Waiting for me to present you a poem
A poem is too short, only one poem -
What I want to say to you is not enough
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Cigeng Zhang
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Edward Kofi Louis 28 July 2016

Waiting for me! Nice work.

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Dev Anand 10 April 2016

I love to give you poetry, emotion and my heart The only chance I cherish is like a dream all i want to say to you. is. it is not enough.... lovely romantic poem . great imagination. thnk ou

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Cigeng Zhang 10 April 2016

Thank you Dev for your nice comment. Sharing is the joy.

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Daniel Brick 23 February 2016

This is a poignant poem - You are showing so much gratitude and readiness for someone in your life. Feelings like these are time travelers, they're already living partly in the future. And because your feelings are genuine, they are telling you the truth: someday it won't be a poem about love, it will be the experience of love, in all of its tenderness and wonder! What matters now is that you are preparing your heart to be the house of love, with thoughts that are generous, feelings that are true, and hopes that are vibrant. This is what I always admire in a poet - who is rehearsing the role she wants to play right now, and will be fully engaged in the future. Poetry and Love are the two ways you become a complete human being. Right, Li Po? Yes, you're right Daniel - True, John Keats? Yes, it's true, Cigeng.

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Cigeng Zhang 24 February 2016

I always want to learn something higher than my work from your comment. Thank you Daniel for taking your time to read my work and write down the beautiful comment.

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