Thursday, August 29, 2013

One Pebble Is Sufficient To Break The Silence Comments

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One pebble is sufficient to break the silence
Mind that mould the thought for violence
Forgets the heaven, in search of the bargain
Once inner world is destroyed, need a gain!
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Heather Wilkins 29 August 2013

one pebble will break the silence. well said

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Geetha Jayakumar 29 August 2013

Very well said, One pebble is just enough to break our head...Physically if we get hurt, we can treat but the one which hits mentally will imbalance us, for too long to come to a standstill...Beautiful poem.....Loved reading it.

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Gajanan Mishra 29 August 2013

earth is our heaven, good write, I like this poem.

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