Friday, May 29, 2020

One Of Two Gooder Poems Comments

Rating: 4.7

My Dawn
You were my first love born
I took you for a dance
once I had my maiden chance
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COMMENTS
Mj Lemon 03 June 2020

One of two..can there, could there be a choice as stark as dawn and eve? Awesome verse, Poet!

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Anjandev Roy 29 May 2020

Brilliant expression throughout....thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

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Varsha M 29 May 2020

Compliment always stick Mismatch just trick Life is a book Day is a new look. First love is just an experience Not to miss the moment supreme When the real one stood in front of me Without mistake I bent on knee to propose. Well expressed poetry but we lose nothing that is meant for me. Appreciations and administration Sir

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Mahtab Bangalee 29 May 2020

super lovely poem ..... dawn to dusk and the night dark greets silently the exotic love hearts......

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