One Of Two Gooder Poems Poem by me poet yeps poet

One Of Two Gooder Poems

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My Dawn
You were my first love born
I took you for a dance
once I had my maiden chance

we danced remember
Dawn
though the night
your parents were watching
from the balcony
I wanted to kiss you
hug you
closely I nearly lipped your nose too

Remember you said
they had eagle's eyes
you scared me out of my wits
then you did smile

But I lied
said yes
I know they will only wrath bestow
and
I withdrew from dancing
being dangerously
too near and slow


Years into the passage of time
I now feel like a coward indeed
why did I not take a chance
just to kiss
perhaps they'd too have
admired us
my, O what a miss

Well many tonnes of water
has since flowed down
the MISSISSIPPI
the NILE
the THAMES
now tears can't help
the time's lost wonderful
and
memorable games

just recall the time gone since
but you and I have become
a living entity
you in someone else's arms
so am I

Time heals they say
but my loss of that day
makes me feel like
a coward
till today

But it was a risky chance for me
I was mounting a new career
the kiss could have resulted
in the end of me
just @19

Friday, May 29, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: dance,dawn ,poem,poetic expression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
JUST CAN'T FORGET THAT DAY
COWARD
THEN
NOW
PP ME
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mj Lemon 03 June 2020

One of two..can there, could there be a choice as stark as dawn and eve? Awesome verse, Poet!

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Anjandev Roy 29 May 2020

Brilliant expression throughout....thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

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Varsha M 29 May 2020

Compliment always stick Mismatch just trick Life is a book Day is a new look. First love is just an experience Not to miss the moment supreme When the real one stood in front of me Without mistake I bent on knee to propose. Well expressed poetry but we lose nothing that is meant for me. Appreciations and administration Sir

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Mahtab Bangalee 29 May 2020

super lovely poem ..... dawn to dusk and the night dark greets silently the exotic love hearts......

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