Those birds are playing Hide and Seek,
But one of them is very weak.
Now they start to compile,
Husk and grains with their peak.
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Very interesting views you take out of nature. Birds need to catch up and create a welfare state!
Very beautiful and interesting. I really enjoyed this great read. :)
good flow of rhyme u make me remember wordsworth... keep it up
The idea is big but you carry it with the whole strength you got...poetry way! _Soul
A poem good enough to throw light on Miss Akanksha`s future prospects as a strong poet. The theme has a piercing element and is realistic in totality. Go ahead like this Akanksha.
sweet as a bird....a potential poem for Children Library...easy and inspiring to read 10/10
great thought....! ! ! and i wish appreciate for that....good job...keep it up....: -) »so close«
At such a young age, I feel, you have got great talent and insight.A nice poem.I liked it.Thanks and wishing you a great life with poetry. Chandra Thiagarajan
meaningful..........and really elegant in its simplicity....... :)
I liked the way you have used the weak bird....... I like the parallel structure of the two stanza and the last two lines clearly telling the reason. Very nice.
Very good well written birds are often associated with beauty and the use of a nest as a metaphor very good.