One Of Those Birds Comments

Very good well written birds are often associated with beauty and the use of a nest as a metaphor very good.

No wealth without health - very true Akanksha. Nice write.

Very interesting views you take out of nature. Birds need to catch up and create a welfare state!

Very beautiful and interesting. I really enjoyed this great read. :)

Beautifully brought out.

good flow of rhyme u make me remember wordsworth... keep it up

Very niceeee! Incredible So nice with great thought

The idea is big but you carry it with the whole strength you got...poetry way! _Soul

Very sweetly penned. loved this

A poem good enough to throw light on Miss Akanksha`s future prospects as a strong poet. The theme has a piercing element and is realistic in totality. Go ahead like this Akanksha.

sweet as a bird....a potential poem for Children Library...easy and inspiring to read 10/10

great thought....! ! ! and i wish appreciate for that....good job...keep it up....: -) »so close«

At such a young age, I feel, you have got great talent and insight.A nice poem.I liked it.Thanks and wishing you a great life with poetry. Chandra Thiagarajan

meaningful..........and really elegant in its simplicity....... :)

I liked the way you have used the weak bird....... I like the parallel structure of the two stanza and the last two lines clearly telling the reason. Very nice.

Meaningful and well written as simple as possible liked it

fabulous.....so true......