Saturday, March 21, 2020

One Of The Day's Dead Comments

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I was almost a prince. My father
favored me over his first-born son.
He was delighted as I excelled
again and again in the arts of fighting.
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Daniel Brick
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Glen Kappy 08 April 2020

daniel, it's been a while since i've read the iliad, if indeed this story can be found there. that aside, i take this poem as a reminder that each person who dies has her or his story, each one not to be merely grouped as the countless dead or a bloodless statistic. -glen

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 March 2020

This poem which you have presented from your past memory has made us emotional. This is excellently penned and treasured with time and reader's memory. Thank you very much for sharing this lovely work...10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 March 2020

Your father was very much affectionate towards you. You were properly nourished by him as a first born son. He had favoured you a lot as a prince. You had listened to your father, to your teachers, to the prophet Calchas with his knowledge of the Gods and Goddesses with great satisfaction and pleasure. You had learnt a lots of things. But war was so sad to take away life. Death provokes thought and gives sorrow. Separation of son with a father was so sad.

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Rajnish Manga 21 March 2020

that beloved sword....became part of my body (From) Anagoras I learned to plan a strategy, to balance strength with cunning.... //... Great poem written in a classic epic style which ends in the tragic death of a hero mourned even by the Gods. Thanks.

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