Friday, December 5, 2008

One Night Stand Comments

Rating: 5.0

I want you here in my cottage
Keep the people away of us
I know we will be far away
I don’t care I wanna take this chance
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Yasser Koor
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Dr Rajesh Kumar Vaid 16 December 2008

The honesty of character about the feelings is praiseworthy, take it or leave it. Kinky idea, Lovely work!

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sara }i{ 16 December 2008

frist u want her so much then u tell her that u don't want her forever nice change i luv it

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Marria Attar 06 December 2008

Wow...nice twist at the end

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Ying Escalona 05 December 2008

very romantic...but you must tell your partner before the show....hope might be built while at work hehehe

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