Tuesday, May 26, 2009

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The whole of my body is covered by one skin
All taken care of and protected by one thing
But when my body is still and left alone to rest
The one part of me I feel lost in never ceases to think at its best
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Sara Tehrani
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Sneha 'The Poetess' 29 May 2009

golly gosh! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ......ur talented............good read..... :)

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Brittany Something 27 May 2009

this is a really beautifully written poem. Keep writing. This is great

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Great poem A different kind of poetry And i love how well you wrote it! ! ! ! ! Keep wrighting! ! ! ! ! ~Unique~

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Saadat Tahir 26 May 2009

its obviously a very good write sara u be proud of it great ideas...excellent content and write one may differ with ideologies but poetry is different...a universa; language that belongs to all ands possessed by none and its atenner from me cheers

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