Saturday, July 7, 2007

One Morning Comments

Rating: 5.0

Woke early one morning
the earth lay cool and still
when suddenly a tiny bird
perched on my window sill
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jools England
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Kesav Easwaran 01 January 2009

good use of metaphor...now the 'bird' must be knowing you are only a night person! good poem presentation technique, Jools...10

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